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Some people say that teachers and parents should decide what assignment or activities children should do after school. Others say that children should make these decisions on their own. Which view do you agree with and why?
来源:北美
分类:Activity
属性:核心预测
解题思路
总观点: 同意老师和家长决定孩子们的课后活动。
分论点1: 家长和老师经验丰富,能够给予孩子更有效的建议和帮助。
论述:运用举例的论证方法,以Bob为例,阐述了母亲对他的帮助,因而支持了分论点1。
分论点2: 能够预防孩子进行危险活动。
论述: 运用了自然延伸和举例的论证方式,提到孩子缺乏常识,很多时候无法做出正确的抉择,并以发生在自己家乡的一件事为例进一步支撑分论点2。
让步段: 孩子进行自己喜爱的活动会获得更多快乐,但是有家长和老师的帮助,他们会收获更多。
论述: 运用了举例论证方式,以表哥为例,阐述了他的老师对他的帮助。
结论: 让家长和老师来决定孩子的课后活动会更好。
范文
Nowadays, some claim that kids should choose what to do after school by themselves because parents and teachers could not know what children really like. However, in my opinion, both teachers and parents should be responsible for children's mental and physical health, so they are entitled to make decisions about children’s after-class activities.
To start with, parents and teachers have abundant life experience, so they can give some really useful and helpful suggestions to students, which can help them learn things more efficiently and effectively. After all, children need to be cultivated to form good habits. Take my little brother Bob for example. Bob is a boy who loves to read books a lot, and he regards author as his future career. However, what he does is only to read some novels for several months because he knows little about how to improve writing skills. Fortunately, his
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