2016年9月10日托福考试小范围核心预测【独立写作】

 总观点： 一个人所拥有的钱越多，那么捐给慈善机构的钱就应该越多。  分论点1： 财富不是轻易得来的，而是辛苦挣得的。  论述：运用了自然延伸的论证方法，阐述了有钱人有权支配自己的财富。  分论点2： 富人可以用其他方式来回报社会。  论述： 运用了举例的论证方式，提到富人们可以通过拓展自己的事业来创造更多财富，并且向政府那更多的税，以此来回报社会。  让步段： 并非反对富人向慈善机构捐钱。  论述： 运用了举例的论证方式，列举了像成龙一样在做慈善的名人很多。  结论： 是否要向慈善机构捐款是富人自己的权利。

I don't agree that the more money people have, the more they should give away to charity. Admittedly, everyone, especially those who have more abilities, have the responsibility to return to society, however, there are many ways to do this, not only by giving money. Money doesn't grow on the trees, and wealth is supposed to be earn, not to be given. The wealthy took their effort to make money, it is themselves should decide how to use their money, which means, it is their right to decide whether to give money to charity or not, and how much they give, it is not a compulsory task. Besides, the wealth have other ways to reward to the society. For

Two-way Brainstorming on the construction of public parks 1. It is a construction benefiting the majority of the public. 2. People have a place to get themselves relaxed after a busy day. 3. It contributes to the natural environment in the city. on the construction of a sport field 1. Students have a place to get themselves physically healthy after class. 2. There are more choices of sports in the PE class. 3. It saves money to maintain a sport field.

Model Answer: on the construction of public parks When advanced economic development has tremendously raised the living standard, what the public are concerned about has been beyond the material life. On the contrary, social welfare, such as public facilities, attracts people more. In the debate over the national investment on public parks or a sport field, I vote for the former. To begin with, it is a construction benefiting the majority of the public. Different from a sport field for physical exercises, the majority of whose participants are the youth, active and energetic, a public park is where everyone can visit. When the expenditure th

总观点： 支持向老师表达意见。 分论点1： 家长向老师表达意见是件正常的事。 论述：运用了自然延伸的论证方法，阐述了家长有权利关注自己孩子的成长并保护孩子不受伤害。 分论点2： 家长表达个人对于教育的想法是合理的。 论述： 运用了自然延伸和举例的论证方式，提到向老师提意见是件好事，并且以自己的经历为例进一步支持了分论点的论述。 让步段： 向老师提意见也会有一些问题存在。 论述： 运用了自然延伸的论证方式，说明了向老师提意见可能出现的问题。 结论： 家长应该和老师交流意见。

Teachers play an important role when children are young. However, nowadays more and more parents are concerned about whether their children can be well educated by teachers. Sometimes, they have different opinions about teacher’s teaching methods, but they wonder if it’s proper to tell the teacher directly. As for me, I think parents should express their disagreement. Firstly, It is normal that parents communicate with teachers about different opinions, whatever the teacher are fond of or not. No one would deny that sending their kids to school, parents have the right to pay close attention to the growth of their kids. There

Three-way Brainstorming A shopping mall 1. To provide job opportunities 2. To make daily purchase convenient 3. To provide a location for people to entertain and get together A theatre 1. To provide a location for people to entertain and get together 2. To increase the choices of entertainment 3. To enrich the culture life in the local area A hotel 1. To attract tourists and boost local tourism 2. To make home visits convenient when guests can live nearby 3. To encourage visits in various purposes, such as business trip

Model Answer: A shopping mall In consideration of boosting the local economy, it is positive for the community to buy a space to develop. And among the three given choices, I think building a shopping mall is the best choice. There are some considerations. To begin with, it provides job opportunities. For example, in the construction of the shopping mall, there is an increasing demand for construction workers. After the completion of the shopping mall, a large number of shop assistants are required in order to serve customers in every floor and counter. Besides, as a shopping mall covers more functions than a theatre or a hotel does, there are demands for other positions, such as security and clean

Two-way Brainstorming Helping others in your community 1. To help others is to restore happiness and inner peace. 2. To help is to pass and spread happiness in the community. 3. To help is to purify the complex society. Healthy diet 1. To keep fit 2. To be physically prepared for the coming year 3. To make contribution to the environment

Model Answer: Healthy diet New year stands for a brand new beginning of the coming year, and this is also the moment when people make plans for the whole year. Other than plans, such as helping others in the community, I prefer to change myself first, which is to have a healthy diet. First of all, the original purpose of the move is to keep fit. There are two advantages for this. On one hand, as is known to all, too much fat slows down our thinking process and makes us sleepy and exhausted. To get rid of the body waste and keep myself refreshed during the whole, I have to quit unhealthy diet. On the other hand, nice figure makes me co