详解托福写作考试中常见的3大类病句

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摘要：相信对大多数想要参加托福考试的同学来说，作文是一个老大难问题。特别是在写作过程中出现了一些病句，自己在反复的检查中也是很难发现的。那么，现在，就跟着小站教育一起来看看有没有什么秘籍能提升你的托福写作水平吧。

新托福写作的评分标准比较高，在语言上的考察点也是非常高，所以新托福考试在语言上一定要引起极度重视，很多考生对于托福写作一筹莫展，那么我们怎么完成一篇优秀的文章呢？其中词汇的重要性我们必须重视，包括遣词和造句两个方面。下面小编为大家分析下三大类型的病句。

1、破碎句

所谓破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是没有谓语（或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式，如分词），或者是从句单独成句。

破碎句：She singing alone.（无谓语，singing是现在分词）

正确句：She is singing alone.

破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. （从句单独成句）

正确句：He did not come because he was sick.

2、接连句

所谓接连据，就是两个句子直接连在一起，既未使用连词，也未使用正确的标点符号。

接连句：Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正确句一：Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正确句二：Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.