托福独立口语高频话题讲师批改实例分享:activity to protect the environment...

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摘要:托福独立口语中有很多高频热点话题,这些话题因为缺乏权威批改,考生可能即使练了也没从中收获有价值的经验。本文将分享托福独立口语高频话题的学生答案和资深讲师批改结果,帮助大家提升独立口语答题技巧。(搜“小站托福”公众号,回复关键词“资讯”,掌握托福最新的考试资讯及留学信息。)

考生在备考独立口语时可能练习了不少口语话题,但因为缺乏有效批改,就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。下面小编就来分享一些来自托福资深讲师针对独立口语高频话题学生答案的专业批改。

本期托福独立口语高频话题

An environmental group is planning to organize an activity to protect the environment. What activity would you suggest?

学生对此话题的表述答案

I think the most significant activity the environmental group should do is to plant more trees worldwide. It is reported that the desert has occupied a fourth of the earth landing surface. And this process is increasing at a alarming speed. As we know, planting tree can reduce the erosion to green area by wind and soil from the deserts. Because the root of green trees can strengthen the sand in the deserts. By doing this, we can protect the environmental conditions both in the cities and deserts.

资深讲师批改意见

发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)

1 worldwide

2 deserts

3 erosion

语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)

1 to green area————in green areas

2 because (delete)

表达部分存在的问题(Expression)

1 landing surface————land surface

2 by wind and soil————caused by wind and soil

此高频话题高分口语模板分享

I think the most significant activity the environmental group should do is to plant more trees worldwide. It is reported that the deserts have occupied a fourth of the earth's land surface. And this process is increasing at an alarming speed. As we know, planting trees can reduce the erosion in gree areas caused by wind and soil from the desserts. The roots of the green trees can strenghten the sand in desserts. By doing this, we can protect the environmental conditioin both in cities and desserts.

以上就是小编为大家分享的托福独立口语高频话题的学生解答和资深讲师批改分析,希望能为大家带来一些独立口语回答方面的帮助。

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