Describe a day that you enjoy the most or is the most special to you.
I still remember the day I got my college entrance exam result. That day is very special for me, most importantly, that's because it's a good proof that allthe hard work in my high school is deserved. I have worked more than 15 hours a day in the last year of my junior high. It's very tireless and exhausted to me, but I insisted it and I finally got the good score, what's more, I think it is also means I will have a very bright future, because I can go to the best university in our country. That would give me a better chance to find a good job.
1 for me————to me
2 the good score————a good score
1 most importantly, that's because————more importantly, it is …
2 good proof to prove————proof
3 the hard work in my high school is deserved————the hard work in high school was rewarded
4 junior high————high school
I still remember the day I got my college entrance exam result. That day is very special to me. Most importantly, it is proof that all the work in high school was rewarded. I have worked more than 15 hours a day in the last year of high-school. It was very tiresome and exhausting to me, but I persevered and I finally got a good score. What's mroe, I think it also means that I will have a very bright future, because I can go to the best university in our country, and that will give me a better chance to find a good job.