托福独立口语高频话题讲师批改实例分享：If the following classes are offered...

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本期托福独立口语高频话题

If the following classes are offered in your community on weekends for free, which one will you choose：a finance course, a car maintenance-and-repair course, or a music-review course?

学生对此话题的表述答案

I think I would choose finance class if this finance class is offered in our community because I think finance or the economy is a very mysterious subject. Because I have seen economy has been up and down over the last three decades. Since I'm not in the economy related major. So I think it is very very mysterious but also mesmerizing. So I would like to choose the finance class.

资深讲师批改意见

发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)

1 mesmerizing

语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)

1 I would choose the finance class.

改正：I would choose a finance class.

表达部分存在的问题(Expression)

1 economy has been up and down

改正：economy has been going/fluctuating up and down

此高频话题高分口语模板分享

Personally, I think I would choose to take a finance class if I could choose one course in my community, because I find it to be very mysterious subject in a way. It's something I don't really understand, unlike, for example, cars. I don't have any idea about finance. I think it is very difficult. I'm also interested in it, because economy has been going up and down these days. And an financial course would probably explain to me at least a littble bit of why that could be. And lastly, I would probably enjoy finance a lot because I really like math, it is probably my favorite subject. So I think learning finance would be another fun class for me to use my mathmetical brain.

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