【备考策略】托福口语高分学霸 居然是这样答题的

• 来道例题：

If a foreign friend of yours is visitingyour city. Which part of town would you recommend him or her to see? And why?

• 传统答案：

If a foreign friend isvisiting my city, I would recommend him or her to visit the YU Garden becauseof the following reasons. First, there are manycharming buildings. Some of them were even designed and built like a 100 yearsago. Second, there are manylocal restaurants around and my friend can taste different kinds of deliciousfood. Last but not least, theplace in the center of my town and the transportation to get there is very convenient. To sum up, If a foreignfriend is visiting my city, I would recommend him or her to visit the YU Garden

• 为什么这个答案得不了高分?看下面：

- 开头重复原题的句子是一个安全但是比较被动的做法。学霸的答案是要体现出主动而自然的表达;

- 中间的三个理由貌似比较充分但实际上每个理由都存在扩展不充分的问题，结果变成了理由的罗列。学霸的答案重点不是在理由的数量(很多题目在15秒职能想到一个理由)，而是在理由的细节扩展上;

- 结尾的总结貌似让整个答案更加完整，但实际上只是对主题句的完全重复，没有任何意义上的功能。学霸的答案一般会把宝贵的时间花在陈述真正有意义的内容上，即使是总结也需要用更多样化的语言;

- First/second/lastnot not least/to sum up这些过渡语表面上让整个答案有逻辑，实际上会让评分者认为答题者在使用准备好的答题模板，导致被压分。学霸的答案是采用更佳自然的过渡。

• 所以，学霸的答案应该是这样的：

I’ll be happy to show myforeign friend the YU Garden which is a beautiful old community loaded withlocal culture.

For one, the architecturethere is amazing. I mean some of the buildings were designed and constructedlike more than 100 years ago and those can give you a really good sense of history and ancientlocal culture, the gigantic stone gate decorated with nice-looking patterns,the delicate wooden roof painted with colorful pictures. You name it .

Also,tons of localrestaurants brings another reason to be there. You can find almost all kinds oflocal snacks which can never be found anywhere else.

Isn't that the perfectplace for a foreign friend?

做学霸，你准备好了吗?

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