2017年12月2日雅思写作小作文原创范文及解析

为大家带来2017年12月2日雅思写作真题范文之小作文：The pie charts below show the proportion graduate with science degree and art degree in a company in 1990 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.写作范文及解析如下：

1.范文解析：本次小作文是一个动态的饼图。注意主要信息点总体趋势，极值和数据的对比。

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2.雅思小作文范文

The two pie charts compare how many graduates in a specific company earned three different levels of Science and Art degree in two years(1990 and 2010).

In 1990, the proportion of graduates holding first degree of Art and Science was the same, both accounting for exactly 18%. By contrast, these figures enjoyed a significant growth by 2010 when they represented at 24% and 27% respectively，outnumbering that of Master of degree, including Art and Science.

As many as 25% and 20% of graduates in 1990 received their Master Degree of Art and Science separately, a little higher than that of the First and PHD Degree . However, Master Degree of Art since then suffered a sharp drop of up to 10% while the fall of the Master of Science Degree slowed to 17% in the year 2010.

It is noticeable that far fewer graduates in this company had received PHD of Science and Art within this decade, all below 12%. There was a only 1% rise in PHD of Science(from 7%-8%) but the 1990-2010 period witnessed a slight fall from 12% to 9% in that of Art.

Overall, although most graduates had Master of Degree in 1990, the First Degree predominated ten years later, with the percentage of PHD Degree always remaining the lowest across this 10-year period.（196words）

3.高分表达：

How many graduates earned 多少毕业生获得了...

Both accounting for 两者都占据...(独立主格)

outnumber 数量上超过

It is noticeable that 值得注意的是

The ...period witnessed a fall... 某一段时间 有一个下降趋势

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