2017年11月25日雅思写作Task1原创小作文范文

为大家带来最新2017.11.25场的雅思写作小作文范文，本场考试的小作文为流程图，题目为：The diagram below describes how to change organic waste into garden fertilizers. Describe the process.以下为范文及范文解析：

1.范文解析:本题是流程图，程序步骤不算繁杂，考生需要根据阶段特征合理分段，注意表示阶段的衔接词的使用要灵活多样和准确，时态用一般现在时较多，恰当使用被动语态可以使得文章表述更客观，注意总结整个图。

2.小站原创雅思小作文范文

The flow chart illustrates the process by which organic waste are converted into garden manure.

It is noticeable that five stages are shown on the diagram. The processes begin with preparing equipment and end at spreading compost materials.

At the initial stage, a plastic container which is about two cubic meters can be used and the cover on the top of it should be kept sealed. Meanwhile, drilling some holes enables air to pass through the device. After that, waste materials including food, grass and newspaper are put into the container layer by layer, of which the depth is the same with 15 centimeters.

At the third stage in the process, the materials are mixed with moderate nitrogen and water is added to keep sufficient moisture before placing the container on hot weather condition. Then, gases escape from the holes after the device is heated by hot weather. Finally, six months later, compost ingredients and worms are produced into high-quality fertilizers which could be spread on gardens.字数 167 words
范文原创自小站叶瑜琪老师

3.高分表达

be converted into 转换成为

garden manure 花园肥料

It is noticeable that…… 显著的是..

At the initial stage 最开始阶段

After that 之后

layer by layer, 逐层

At the third stage in the process 第三阶段

are mixed with 被混合

high-quality fertilizers 优质肥料