考官g类雅思书信小作文9分范文建议信：写给交通运输公司（formal）

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摘要：为大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思g类小作文。考官亲笔，用他的惯用的5段式写作，本文主题-建议信：写给交通运输公司，formal写作文体，共162词。苦于没有好的g类小作文范文的烤鸭们，可以好好研读模仿。

相比较A类雅思作文，网络上与市面上的g类作文资料相对较少，g类书信小作文就更少，而质量上乘的就少之又少，而天下烤鸭，苦小作文久矣，迫切需要可信赖的范文的指导，所以，请看本文前考官同学的精彩演绎。本文主题建议信：写给交通运输公司，共162词，band 9。考官的五段套路：客套导语+3主体+结语。请看题。

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There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the transport company. In your letter

describe the problems

explain how these problems are affecting the public

suggest some changes that could be made.

范文

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to bring to your attention some issues with my local train service.

I take the Bam train from Manchester to Liverpool every morning. This week, my train has arrived at least 10 minutes late each day, and I have been unable to find a seat due to overcrowding.

Passengers are becoming increasingly frustrated. I have seen several people complain to members of your staff that the delays are making them late for work, and the overcrowding means that many of us are

forced to stand in the central aisle of the train for the duration of the journey. This is extremely uncomfortable.

I would like to suggest that you run a more regular service on the Manchester to Liverpool line. Another solution would be to add an extra carriage to trains at peak times in order to provide more space.

I hope you will address these concerns as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Paul Jones(162)

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