考官雅思写作小作文满分范文柱状图:电子游戏

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摘要：为大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文。考官亲笔，用最正统的4段式写作，本文主题-柱状图:电子游戏，共187词。苦于小作文的烤鸭们，可以好好研读模仿。

相比较雅思大作文，网络上与市面上的小作文资料相对较少，质量上乘的就更少，而天下烤鸭，苦小作文久矣，迫切需要图表类范文的指导，所以，请看本文前考官同学的精彩演绎。柱状图：电子游戏，共187词，band9.

话题：The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.

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满分范文：

The bar chart compares the turnover in dollars from sales of video games for four different platforms, namely mobile phones, online, consoles and handheld devices, from 2000 to 2006.

It is clear that sales of games for three out of the four platforms rose each year, leading to a significant rise in total global turnover over the 7-year period. Sales figures for handheld games were at least twice as high as those for any other platform in almost every year.

In 2000, worldwide sales of handheld games stood at around $11 billion, while console games earned just under $6 billion. No figures are given for mobile or online games in that year. Over the next 3 years, sales of handheld video games rose by about $4 billion, but the figure for consoles decreased by $2 billion. Mobile phone and online games started to become popular, with sales reaching around $3 billion in 2003.

In 2006, sales of handheld, online and mobile games reached peaks of 17, 9 and 7 billion dollars respectively. By contrast, turnover from console games dropped to its lowest point, at around $2.5 billion.(187)

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