【雅思范文点评】移民需要融入当地文化么

范文赏析：移民需要接受当地文化么

A much-debated issue these days is whether people should accept the different values and the new lifestyle when they move to a new country. It has become a focus of public interest. Notions about it vary greatly. People can hardly reach an absolute consensus and therefore it is wise to take a closer look at the arguments at both sides before I present my pinion.

Advocates of this hot issue hold the belief that it is imperative for people to accept the different values and the new lifestyle when they settle in a new country. To begin with, it is beneficial for immigrants to adapt social life if they learn more about the local culture and lifestyle, especially for children. It is easily for them to make friends with others in schools. Moreover, it is necessary for settlers change their lifestyle and accept the new values. When in Roma, do as the Romans do. Last of all, immigrants will feel isolated and depressed if they have no idea about the culture and lifestyle of this country.

Some other people, however, are strongly against this hit issue for several reasons. First and foremost, it is ridiculous for people to abandon their original culture and lifestyle when they move to a new country. Furthermore, it is a breach of one’s basic right if me ask them to change their lifestyle. We should show greater respect for each other’s religions and cultures. Last but not least, it is significant for people to maintain cultural diversity as it is vital for people to pass their culture on to their offsprings. Meanwhile, it would be a pity for the descendants to know nothing about the culture of their ancestors.

In the final analysis, both sides have sound foundations. However, if asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to assent to the latter. It is sensible for immigrants to keep their culture and lifestyle when they move to a new country.

点评：经典例句运用自如，全文基本还是简明扼要，而且作者很喜欢使用省略主语的表达方式，这样就避免了罗嗦，有些鸭子写作文就习惯性地不断的用I 或是me，显得很拖沓，第一作者往往不需要反复强调“我”的存在。

但就其观点而言，似乎并不太讨巧，换言之，不是很立得住脚。不排除考场上，情急之下不一定能够考虑得那么全面，但是，作为移民，肯定是要融入当地文化无疑的，融入当地文化并不意味着就要放弃自己的原有文化，二者并没有作者描述的那么对立，而且当地人也是最欢迎能够融入其文化的移民，不然就容易造成移民的个体孤立，纵览近些年的海外移民因为孤立而造成的社会问题，归根到底都是由于不能融入文化造成的。作为准备移民的鸭子，还是应该考虑清楚，移民有风险，考试要谨慎!