雅思小作文人口百分比范文

雅思小作文：城市人口百分比变化范文

题目：
The line graph illustrates the percentage of urban dwellers in four Asian countries (Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia) between 1970 and 2020, with projections until 2040.

范文：

The line graph presents data on the proportion of the population residing in urban areas across four Asian countries—Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia—from 1970 to 2020, with projections extending to 2040.

Overall, all four countries have experienced an upward trend in urbanization over the five decades covered, with projections indicating further increases in city-dwelling populations by 2040.

In 1970, the Philippines already had a relatively high urban population percentage at around 31%, which steadily increased, reaching approximately 44% by 2020. The forecast suggests a continued rise to nearly 54% by 2040.

Malaysia started at a lower base of around 30% in 1970 but saw a sharp rise over the years, overtaking the Philippines by 2010 and is expected to approach nearly 82% by 2040.

Thailand and Indonesia began with similar urban population percentages in 1970, around 19% and 14% respectively. However, Thailand's urbanization pace has been more rapid, with the percentage increasing to just under 60% by 2020 and predicted to surpass 70% by 2040. Indonesia, while increasing at a slower rate, also shows significant growth in urbanization, projected to reach about 62% by 2040 from approximately 50% in 2020.

In conclusion, while all four countries show significant growth in urban populations, Malaysia’s rate of urbanization is the most pronounced, suggesting a major shift towards urban living by 2040. This trend underscores the ongoing transformation in the living patterns within these developing nations, reflecting broader global urbanization trends.

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范文解析

1. 结构清晰：
   • Introduction：概括图表内容，点明时间跨度及数据来源。
   • Overview：总结总体趋势，强调所有国家城市化均呈上升趋势。
   • Details：分国家描述具体数据及变化，突出对比。
   • Conclusion：总结关键发现，强调马来西亚的领先地位。
2. 数据呈现：
   • 使用具体百分比（如31%、82%）和预测数据（如2040年预测值）。
   • 强调时间节点（如1970年、2020年、2040年）和转折点（如马来西亚2010年超过菲律宾）。
3. 语言运用：
   • 使用多样化句式（如定语从句、现在完成时、被动语态）。
   • 运用连接词（如However、In contrast）增强逻辑性。
4. 评分要点：
   • Task Achievement：完整覆盖图表信息，突出主要特征。
   • Coherence and Cohesion：段落分明，逻辑连贯。
   • Lexical Resource：使用学术词汇（如urbanization、projections）。
   • Grammatical Range and Accuracy：时态正确，句式多样。

此范文符合雅思小作文评分标准，重点突出数据描述与对比分析，适合备考参考。