8分表达: No I wouldn't, the main reason being that I love my hometown, so if I moved somewhere else, I'm sure I wouldn't be as happy as I am living here.
点评:同样是歌颂家乡好,话锋一转,在这个表达中就柔和了许多。虚拟语气的运用显示出了较好的语言功底。再次重申,理由(reasons)和例子(examples)在口语中是非常非常重要的得分点。
Question 6: Can you describe your home a little?
6分表达: My home is big, for example we have a big living room. And um……We also have a good view because our flat is very high.
点评: 其实这个答案并不会得很低分。一般想要6分的同学完全可以这样说。对于想要7分甚至于是更高的烤鸭们而言,切记切记,一定要explain more!
8分表达: Yeah, sure. Well first of all, it's pretty big. For example, the living room is about three or four times the size of this room. And, um…what else… oh yeah, and another thing to mention is the view, because we live quite high up, on the twentieth floor, so we've got a really nice view of the city centre.
点评:在考试的高压下假如能说出这样的答案,那么7分妥妥的。对于家的描述可以说是雅思的经典题型,其变体的出现频率非常高,但烤鸭们要回答得好还是有点难度的,因为可讲的东西有很多,稍不留神就会显得messy。这个回答中,告诉了考官房间的大小(three or four times the size of this room),楼层的高低。全篇都是细节,非常符合高分的三大准则。
好了,看了以上那么多例子,小伙伴们是不是都大概了解高低分表达分别长什么样子了呢?在如今这个70分才能移民成功的时代,雅思4个7显得异常重要。祝大家都能够早日屠鸭成功!