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【备考锦囊】3个月攻下雅思写作高分城池

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摘要：很多基础差的学生在雅思的学习中都有这样的感觉，其他的几个方面都在短期的培训中有所提高，唯独写作很难有个很高的提高，尤其是基础差的考生，达到了五分之后，很难再提高到六分或者更高了，一直在五分左右徘徊。

一个词与它的派生词一起出现,造成意思重复,给人以累赘的感觉,改正后的句子变得简洁多了。

③ (误)Waste gas is t he main cause which leads to air pollution .

(正)Waste gas is t he main cause of air pollution.

cause和lead to都表原因,同时使用造成意思重复。

4、逗号连接错误。

中国学生在英语写作中常常单独使用逗号而不用句号、分号、冒号或连结词来连接两个或几个独立的分句。例如:

① (误)The weather was fine, we decided to climb t he mountain.

(正)As the weather was fine, we decided to climb t he mountain.

② (误)The [wv]prospects[/vw] are bright, the road has twists and turns.

(正)While t he prospects are bright, the road has twists and turns.

上面两个标有误的句子在语法上没有错误,它错就错在逗号的使用不当。错误的根源是学生受汉语写作习惯的影响,把汉语逗号的作用等同于英语逗号的作用。在汉语中,逗号可以单独使用在并列分句之间。

(1)变成两个简单句:

The wind was blow ing very hard. They couldn’t go boating on t he lake.

(2)变成并列句,用逗号加并列连接:

The wind was blowing very hard they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.

(3)变成并列句,用分号连接:

The wind was blowing very hard; couldn’t go boating on t he lake.

(4)变成并列句,用分号加连接性副连接:

The wind was blowing very hard ,therefore, they couldn’t go boating on lake.

(5)变成并列句,有时也可以用冒接,这时第二个分句解释说明第一个分句

They couldn’t go boating on the lake; the wind was blowing very hard.

(6)变成复合句:

As the wind was blowing very hard they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.

(7)用独立主格结构改写句子:

The wind blowing very hard, they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.

如果大家在词汇和语法有一定累积的基础上，再避免出现中式英语的东西，加上观点的正确性，我想那些基础差的考生想拿到写作六分，应该可以如愿以偿的。最后祝愿大家在新的一年里，能够顺利通过雅思考试，拿到心中的分数。

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