2个托福写作备考建议 让自己的写作用词更精准

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摘要:在托福备考过程中,托福写作都会是难住广大考生的一个问题。本文主要为为大家详细介绍一下如何让自己的托福写作用词更精准,帮助我们提升托福写作成绩。希望能为大家的托福备考带来帮助。

在托福写作备考过程中,如果想要写出一个优秀的文章,对于文字数量是有着一定的要求的。但是,却也并不代表着,越多的文字就越能体现文章的“高大上”,在托福文章中内容的准确,用词的精准才是最为重要的。过于追求字数,反而会让自己的文章变得繁琐,从无法获得高分。那么,怎样才能使自己的成绩变得更为简洁和精准呢?

建议一: 避免空洞的单词和词组

1. 在托福写作中,一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子:

When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换,例如:

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

建议二: 避免重复

1. 在托福写作中,尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子::

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改为:

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更简洁的表达方式为:

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换,例如:

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.

这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly,显得更为简洁:

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm

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