资深导师谈中国留学生套磁信 老板的回信一定要Email回复啊!(内附正反面案例)

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摘要:本文将分享一篇资深导师对留学生套磁信的指导建议,文中提供正反面例子各2个,同时附有点评,指出陶瓷信中的有哪些优缺点。现在offer到手后,是时候考虑如何与心仪导师套近乎了。

来看2个正面的例子:下面这封离开模板千里,但是我直接打电话问他的情况了,其中的一个关键是:他看了我研究组的网站,知道我的组做什么,卖点是什么。

正例1:

Dear Dr XXXX,

I am a student at XXXXX with a major in XXXX. I am a master honor student and will be graduating this December. I am planning to attend graduate school in XXXXX, with a focus on XXXXX. I have been exploring XXXX graduate programs when I am working on XXXX project, and I am particularly interested in your research interest, XXXX.I hope you don’t mind my getting in touch, but I’d like to inquire whether you are currently accepting PhD students. If you are, would you willing to talk to me a bit more by email. I have explored your website in detail, and it seems like an excellent fit for me because of its emphasis on XXXX.I know you’re very busy so I appreciate any time you can reply me.

Thanks very much,

Sincerely,

再来看个印度学生的套磁信,信件写的很感人,但是可能印度IIT的统一模板就是这个,因为差不多到了每年某个时候,我就可以收到一大堆这种架构的信。其实内容还是很勾人的呢。

正例2:

Dear Professor XXXXX,

I read your paper 'XXXXXXXXXXXXX' and the experience was quite overwhelming as well as enriching.(你看,我知道你的亮点文章,其实谁知道看没看呢。)I am a pre-final year undergraduate student at Indian Institute of Technology (IIT) XXXX, India pursuing my B.S-M.S Dual degree in XXXX. While browsing through your profile, I came to know about your Research work.I have had quite a few research experiences in past which include research internships with Princeton University (U.S.A), IBM research (India) and University of Greifswald (Germany).(牛校走过一番啊,营造出哄抢气氛:你不要我,有的是人要我呢。)I wish to pursue a research project under your guidance/or otherwise would be glad even if I could assist you in any currently ongoing project during XXX . I am interested and enthusiastic to carry out productive research so as to enhance and exploit my skills and to contribute positively to the research going on in these fields. I think that my efforts and new ideas could be quite helpful to what the project/research topic demands.(我对你干的事情会有帮助的呢:说不定有new idea哦)I tried to contact you a few months back also but there was some issues with my email server leading to some difficulties in receiving emails.(前几个月我EMAIIL过你的,但是你没理我,算啦,我就给你个台阶,说也许我大学邮件服务器不给力:给老板造成内疚感,你不理我!其实呢,老板也记不清是不是收到过了,一般都删除的,对吧?)Should you require any more information, I would be glad to provide. My Curriculum Vitae is attached along with for your kind perusal.Thanking you for your kind consideration and looking forward to receiving your favorable response on the subject.

Best Regards,

平心而论,这封套磁信属于典范级别的了。不过由于IIT的学生差不多每人都这个套路,许多老板都看厌倦了,所以你还是需要小心使用。按照思路,自己改编个具有中国特色的吧。

看完了导师的实力分享,是不是对套磁信有了更进一步的认识,小编需要提醒大家的是,有些专业并不需要写套磁信,小伙伴们一定要了解清楚,千万不要多此一举。

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