2018雅思小作文9范文分享之柱状图 男女健身会员数量变化

请看2018最新的雅思a类小作文话题，关于柱状图题型，9分范文，共193词。The chart below shows male and female fitness membership between 1970 and 2000 in Someland.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

雅思小作文解析

像之前说的，先要进行的是essay planning，我一般要求自己尽量三分钟内完成，图文复杂的，最多不能超过五分钟。

1. 确定图标类型，这一步很简单，都看得出来是，柱状图

2. 决定body part(一般是两段)如何分段.这道题也很明显，catergory一共就俩，“women”和“men”。

3.准备三点Overview的comments，也就是第一个难点，这里一定一定不要想得太复杂，而且!不要出现具体数字。就先问自己，这个图最明显的特点是啥?从category(性别)入手先横向比较，一般先看个体差异，男女人数差异大不大?几乎每年，男女人数都有较大差别;再看整体差异，总的来说男女人数的到底谁高谁低呢?男高女低;最后纵向比较下，哪一年最不一样，需要单独点出?1995，因为这一年，男女总数最多。

4. 最后需要选出每一个body paragraph里需要的6-8个features。之前说过，起点终点，特殊转折点，最值点都是必须提到的。这里拿Men举例，起点→more than 2k，转折点→1975翻番，1980又下降了，之后的1985，1990变化不大，就可以略过去了，最值点→1995(翻三倍&是全场最高点)，终点→2000，1k，而且!!又来个全场最低点，千万不要忘记提，不然会被判缺失key feature,Task achievement直接掉4.

9分雅思小作文范文：

万事俱备之后就可以动笔了， Introduction很简单，paraphrase下迅速一两分钟完成。

The graph illustrates changes in gym membership numbers over a thirty year period, divided by gender.

Overview一般开头就写“overall”，绝对不会错，之后三个点短句写出来，两个用“and”连接，剩下一个单着就行 。

Overall, the figures for both males and females varied significantly, and 1995 was the busiest year. Over the whole period, there were more male memberships than female.

好了，大头来了，用不同句式巧妙的连接features。

In terms of males, the figure began at just over 2000, with it doubling to 4k five years later, before dropping back to around 2500 in 1980. It fell further to approximately 1800 in 1985, while it subsequently recovered to around 2k in 1990 and then climbed dramatically to a peak of 5k in 1995. It ended the period significantly lower, at 1k, its lowest point.

这里要注意的是，不管是句子结构还是用词，一定一定避免重复，下面给大家列几组：“begin， start，end”“increase，climb，peak，rise，recover”“decrease，fall，drop，dip”“dramatically，significantly”“before，thereafter，then”“around，approximately，about”。

最后一段就直接放上来给大家看看啦!

That of females followed a similar, yet softer trend. It began at just over 1k, which was the equal lowest figure in the chart as a whole, and doubled to 2k in 1975, before it dipped slightly thereafter. It then rose to 2800 and fell back to 2k in 1985 and 1990 respectively, when it exceeded the male numbers, while it jumped back to the former figure five years later. It fell to 2k at the end of the timeframe, double that of men.

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