2018雅思图表小作文混合图范文分享 世界用水

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摘要:2018年,为所有的IELTSer分享最权威的雅思图表小作文范文。本文为雅思小作文的较难题型混合图,题型为:线图+表格,话题是全球的水用途以及某两国的用水量。请看前考官simon带来的band9答案,共184词。

请看最新的雅思a类小作文话题,关于混合图(线图+表格)题型:The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Write at least 150 Words.(100年间的世界水用途变化以及2000年巴西和刚果的水消耗。请写一篇150字以上的报告。)

雅思图表小作文混合图(线图+表格)9分范文:

The charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.

It is clear that global water needs rose significantly between 1900 and 2000, and that agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water used. We can also see that water consumption was considerably higher in Brazil than in the Congo.

In 1900, around 500km³ of water was used by the agriculture sector worldwide. The figures for industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of that amount. By 2000, global water use for agriculture had increased to around 3000km³, industrial water use had risen to just under half that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately 500km³.

In the year 2000, the populations of Brazil and the Congo were 176 million and 5.2 million respectively. Water consumption per person in Brazil, at 359m³, was much higher than that in the Congo, at only 8m³, and this could be explained by the fact that Brazil had 265 times more irrigated land.(184 words, band 9)

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For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所擅长的图表作文4段9句大法,具体结构如下:

1.Introduction: 1 sentence,Introduction段落,1句话介绍图表大意足矣

2.Overview (summary): 2 sentences,Overview段,用2句话做图表信息的摘要

3.First 'details' paragraph: 3 sentences

4.Second 'details' paragraph: 3 sentences。

三、四段为细节段,每段3句做详细的特征或规律的描述。

当然,Simon同学不忘补充,这只是他个人在写作时的偏好结构,好文无定法,大家也不需要拘泥于9句,只要内容表达的需要,8句,10句都是没问题的。

PS:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段,雅思届尚无定论。

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