关于雅思写作,网上流传着各色滥竽充数的范文,小编私以为,这些粗糙的范文的存在,是中国烤鸭雅思写作平均分低下的众多原因之一。是故小编浪迹网络搜集了前考官simon的雅思a类小作文共计41篇,全部采用他惯常的4段式套路,字数一般不过200词,绝对是雅思写作范文里的一股清流,非常养眼。请看本文针对常规题型的雅思小作文表格题范文,话题是澳大利亚不同类型的家庭的贫困率,全文共150词,9分级。
The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
该表格1999年澳大利亚不同类型的家庭的贫困率。请作答。
The table gives information about poverty rates among six types of
household in Australia in the year 1999.
It is noticeable that levels of
poverty were higher for single people than for couples, and people with children
were more likely to be poor than those without. Poverty rates were considerably
lower among elderly people.
Overall, 11% of Australians, or 1,837,000
people, were living in poverty in 1999. Aged people were the least likely to be
poor, with poverty levels of 6% and 4% for single aged people and aged couples
respectively.
Just over one fifth of single parents were living in
poverty, whereas only 12% of parents living with a partner were classed as poor.
The same pattern can be seen for people with no children: while 19% of single
people in this group were living below the poverty line, the figure for couples
was much lower, at only 7%.(150 words, band 9)
段一:话题重述
段二:概括话题数据的主要特征或规律
段三:详述特征规律一
段四:详述特征规律二
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