2017年12月9日雅思写作真题范文之小作文

为大家带来2017年12月9日雅思写作真题范文之小作文：The charts below show the average age men and women retired in seven countries in 2004 and 2008.图标数据有关男女退休年龄的数据。

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1.范文解析：本题为多图复杂性柱状图。考试在处理数值时务必做好取舍。其中重点描述最高和最低数值以及差值比较有特色的数值，此外的数值可以省略不谈。另，当考虑主体段分段时，基本按照图形呈现方式为依据(男女各一段即可)。最后，在描述年纪时切忌使用“高、低”或“大、小”这类形容词。

2.雅思小作文范文

The bar charts compare the average retirement age of females and males in seven nations in the years 2004 and 2008.

From the chart, it can be seen that except for Italian women, females in other six countries retired at older age in 2008 compared with those who retired in 2004. Besides, the retirement age of French women was youngest at 58.7 years old in 2004 and 58.8 years old in 2008. By contrast, Swedish females did not retire until they were at the age of 63 year-old in 2004 and 63.5 years old in 2008, which was the oldest retiring age among those mentioned countries.

Regarding to men, apart from those in Italy where they retried at the age of 63 in both years, male retirement age was raised in other nations in 2008 and the biggest increase was seen in the figure for males in Germany. It is interesting to note that the age of retired men in French was also the youngest but in Sweden the oldest.

Overall, it is noticeable that males worked for a longer period than females both in 2004 and 2008.(188 words)

3.高分表达

From the chart, it can be seen that… 从图表中我们可以看出…

compared with 相比较

By contrast 相比之下

Regarding to 关于

the biggest increase was seen in the figure for… …的数据得到了最大的增长

It is interesting to note that… 有趣的是，我们注意到…

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