10月21日雅思A类写作小作文范文

小作文

类型

表格

题目

The table shows information about the numbers of Australian people who visited the seven most popular destinations in 1999 and 2009.

范文解析

此表格图形为9月9日的考试原题。横排数目比较多，竖列项目比较少。在确定写作思路之前，务必明确各项内容在不同年份的排名以及是否有相同或者差异之处，以便对比总结、确定写作重点。该表格切忌一味地描述各目的地国家游客数量在10年内的变化（由于都是增长趋势很难凸显重点）。

高分表达（范文中已用红色标注）

The table illustrates how the number of …varied in a period from… to …

图表显示了某段时期…的数量变化情况

on the contrary

正相反

over a decade

十年间

prevalent destinations

主要的目的地

It is noticeable that…

显而易见的是

reach the fifth-ranking position

达到第五位

soared with above 150% of growth rate

涨了1.5倍

范文

The table illustrates seven destinations that Australian people paid a visit to and how the number of those tourists varied in a ten-year period from 1999 to 2009.

In the year 1999, New Zealand was the most popular country, with the figure of 500,700 travellers, which was followed by United Kingdom ( 400,000) and United States (300,000). There were over 100,000 people visiting Indonesia, Fiji and Japan. On the contrary, the number of visitors to China was only 86,000.

Over a decade, although the top three prevalent destinations remained the same, the situation of other countries had changed dramatically. It is noticeable that China gained more popularity, reaching the fifth-ranking position while the least people travelled to Japan, at 250,000. Fiji merely attracted 7,000 more visitors compared with that in Japan.

Overall, it can be seen that more and more residents in Australia travelled abroad. Moreover, the number of tourists to three Asian nations and Fiji had soared with above 150% of growth rate, especially for China, almost tripled in the ten years.

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172 words