2017年9月16日雅思小作文范文：柱状图

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摘要：为大家带来9月16日雅思写作考试task1真题范文。本次小作文考的柱状题。请看小站范钰红老师带来原创范文

The chart shows the amount of wind power generated in four countries between 1985 and 2000。

题目分析：

本题属于柱状图中的复杂类别。考生在处理数据时，需要多观察每个国家风能产量在20年之间的变化特征，找出重点数值和趋势变化，如1985 年和1990年印度和丹麦相等的数值，以及之后迅猛的发展趋势。此外，词汇方面由于“风能”的专有名词性质以及“产量”和“产生”这两个单词的替换局限性，考生务必需要多替换句型使得语句表述丰富起来。

参考范文：

The bar chart illustrates the megawatt of wind energy produced in four nations around the world in the period ranging from 1985 to 2000.

It is noticeable that Germany had always generated the most wind energy for the first 15 years and the amount of this clean energy reached a peak at approximately 1650 megawatts before dropping to 1500 megawatts in 2000.

Regarding to India and Denmark, there were 200 megawatts produced in both of them in the year 1985 and their figures both doubled in 1990. The following decade witnessed a dramatic growth in their amount and the output in Denmark finally exceeded that in Germany, with the highest figure of 1700 megawatts in 2000. As for US, the increase in this energy output was steady per five years.

Overall, it can be seen that the output of wind energy in three countries (India, Denmark and US) had been climbing during this 20-year period and the biggest rise was seen in Denmark.

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