2017年8月12日雅思大作文真题范文

Some groups of people benefited from the modern communications technology but some people have not benefited at all.Do you agree or disagree?

话题分析与思路

这是一道典型的科技类话题，考点在于现代沟通科技的优缺点，单纯讲沟通方式是个很宽泛的概念，可以讲概念细化，从工作和生活两大方面入手，讲科技对工作和生活沟通方式带来的利弊，分别作为主体段。

开头段引出话题，表明作者观点，科技对人类做出了很大贡献

主体段一从对工作影响的角度论述了科技对人们工作效率的提高

主体段二从对生活影响的角度论述科技拉近人们之间的距离

结尾段强调观点

范文分享：

The advent of telecommunication technology has revolutionized our work patterns and lifestyle. Despite the claim that one has never reaped benefit from this invention，others，as well as I， insist that it has made great contribution to humans more than one aspect.

In this information age，mobile technology makes a huge difference to people’s working style，thus enhancing their efficiency and productivity. With faster access to the digital reports from colleagues or superiors，staff are allowed to shorten/cut their time spent on insignificant things and therefore accomplish more tasks in the same given period. For example，instead of room-based conference in which people are gathered and then allocated tasks one by one，an email to the target employ with full details of the assignments will do. The time saved can be applied for better use，like training to sharpen their skills or embarking on next project that has long been waiting on the to-do list.

Outside offices，this new technology also brings people closer with strong and lifelong relationship in their life even though the pursuit of career advancement，education attainment and other personal ambitions has scattered them in almost every possible corner of the world. The prosperity of social networking websites and APPs has witnessed the boom of interaction among friends，relatives and strangers. It is not uncommon now to share one's life，for instance，adorable pets，memorable travels，or tasty home-made food on Twitter and INS. The comments and dialogues following these pictures and videos persuade people that they are never alienated from their beloved ones in spite of the geographic distance.

In conclusion，people have been benefitting from modern interaction technology both in their workplace and at home in different ways.

(原创来自黄天枝老师)