2017年8月19日雅思写作考试范文

雅思写作话题：In recent years pressure on school and university students has been increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 近年来学生身上的压力越发大，他们必须从小就刻苦努力。好与坏？

写作框架：

Paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。

Paragraph 2: 论述从小刻苦努力会带来的两个积极影响。即，适应大环境以及最大程度挖掘自己的潜能。

Paragraph 3: 升华刻苦努力为一种人生态度，强调对于整个一生的影响。

Paragraph 4: 论述反方观点，承认这样做的一些负面影响。

Paragraph 5: 总结自己的观点，并给出恰当的建议。

参考范文

In modern megacities, it is common to see that children at 5 years old are required to attend a variety of curriculums such as dancing, drawing and second language learning. Some people contend that it contributes to their individual development. From my perspective, I agree with this view to some extent.

Admittedly, it is indispensable to urge children to work hard in such a competitive society. In fact, when entering primary schools, pupils endeavor to gain better grades and teachers’ compliment. If they fail to devote themselves to study, it is likely for them to fall behind peers or even lose the interest in learning. In addition, one’s potential can never be achieved without persistent efforts. Most distinguished pianists or dancers started their training at the age of three or four, spending all time in learning and practicing. So do the authoritative learners who had cultivated the reading habit at their early age.

Furthermore, a hardworking or diligent learning attitude benefits children for the whole life. There is an old saying that: “ You must reap what you have sown.” It means that whether success of academic work, career or life can be achievable depends on how hard a person works. Consequently, in order to cope with the adversity and hardship, there is no doubt that children are supposed to be instilled and conform to this approach.

However, we can not deny the negative impacts it brings. The first one is that childhood, which is often thought as the happiest time of one’s life, may be filled with mathematic formulas or new vocabularies. Naturally, less time is left for children to appreciate the magic of nature or share happiness and sorrows with friends. What’s worse, once lost, it lost forever. How could a young man experience the same feeling as a kid even if they are flying a kite together? Mankind can never walk back to the past.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that children should be forced to work hard from a young age in an attempt to make brilliant achievements while it does not mean that all their leisure activities should be banned. Instead, they are encouraged to alternate work with rest.

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