2017年7月29日雅思写作考试小作文范文：饼图

The pie charts show the class size in primary (elementary) schools in four states in Australia in 2010.

本题属于静态多饼图。考生在处理该类图形时务必多观察内容之间的关联和对比性。虽然饼图数目比较多，且每个饼图内的成分也较多，但是一定要沉着冷静，多对比，突出图形的主要特征。此外，本题的语句表述也比较复杂，在写句子时务必需要搞清楚百分比和班级规模之间的关系。(百分比指的是百分之多少的小学的班级规模是多少)

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The pie charts compare the number of pupils in elementary schools in four states of Australia in the year 2010.

It is clear to see that there were 21-25 students having a class in most primary schools ( 51%) in Australian Capital Territory, and the second common class size was 20 students or fewer per class, accounting for 38%. The same situation occurred in Western Australia, and New South Wales whose major elementary school’s class size was 21-25 students per class, taking up 42% and 37% respectively.

On the contrary, 35% of primary schools in South Australia arranged 20 students or fewer in one class, and its figure exceeded the proportion of class size with 21-25 students (33%). In this state, 26-30 students attended classes together in 28% of primary schools, which was almost matched by that in Western Australia; while only 10% of schools in Australian Capital Territory was with that class size. In contrast, it was another general size in New South Wales, with 33%.

Overall, it can be seen that the fewest primary schools in four states had the class size of 30 students or more. However, most of them enrolled 21-25 students in every class

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