2017年6月24日雅思写作考试小作文范文：柱状图

The chart below shows the percentage of female aged 16-25 in a particular country who participate in sports, compared with the percentage of people who watch them

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解析：这是一篇静态的表格，分析数据时注意不要把所有数据放到作文中去，挑选相差较大的值、最值、倍数来做对比。另外，常见的替换词，比如occupy = cover=make up= account for, 是必须要掌握的。

The bar chart indicates how the proportion of female sport participants aged 16-25 is different from that of game viewers in some country. (用how ……is different from来将题目中的名词词组换成从句形式，用sport participants和game viewers将从句换成名词---首段改写除了同义词替换，还可以有句型替换)

It is clear from the picture that tennis，golf and horse riding and racing see larger gap between the percentage of people who actually participate and that of audience.(第一句话表明思路，按数据差距大小来分析) To be more specific，there are much more tennis players than watchers(50% VS 30%). Conversely, more people prefer watching golf or horse riding and racing, with the percentage of audiences of both games three times as much as that of players.(注意必要的逻辑连接词)

On the other hand， in athletics，basketball and badminton， there is no big difference between people who choose to watch these games and their counterparts who play. The percentage of people watching and playing former two sports is nearly the same(20% and 15% respectively)，much higher than the latter(badminton players occupying 11% and watchers merely covering 5%).(注意小作文当中括号的灵活使用)

In general，tennis is the most popular sport while badminton is the least welcome one.

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