考官雅思写作小作文满分范文柱状图:网聊耗时

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摘要：为大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文。考官亲笔，用最正统的4段式写作，本文主题-柱状图:网聊耗时，共188词。苦于小作文的烤鸭们，可以好好研读模仿。

相比较雅思大作文，网络上与市面上的小作文资料相对较少，质量上乘的就更少，而天下烤鸭，苦小作文久矣，迫切需要图表类范文的指导，所以，请看本文前考官同学的精彩演绎。柱状图：网聊耗时，共188词，band9.考官的四段套路：introduction+overview+2body。

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The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15-year-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK.

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满分范文：

Introduction

The bar chart compares the time spent by 10 to 15-year-olds in the UK on two activities, namely chatting online and playing computer games.

Overview

Overall, we can see that playing computer games is marginally more popular than chatting on the Internet. However, completely different trends can be seen if we look at the specific figures for boys and girls.

Boys aged between 10 and 15 clearly favour playing on games consoles over chatting online. According to the chart, while 85% of boys play computer games every day, only 55% chat online daily. Furthermore, the majority of boys play on their consoles for more than one hour each day, and 10% do this activity for four hours or more.

By contrast, girls prefer chatting online. Close to 70% of 10 to 15-year-old girls engage in online conversation each day, compared to about 50% of this cohort who play computer games. Of the girls who do play on consoles, most of them play for less than an hour, whereas most girls who chat online do so for more than one hour, and nearly 10% chat for four hours or more.（188）

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