2016年11月5日雅思考试大作文范文

Task:Some people think individuals are more and more dependent on each other.some people think individuals are more and more independent. Discuss.

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Sample answer:

Some people think that there is a growing level of individuals' dependency on those around us, e.g ， families,friends and work colleagues. However, I do not think that this is the case.

Independence has become more predominant due to modern technologies increasing our exposure to global events. We are therefore becoming more educated and well informed, and as a result we are able to be more open minded than in the past. This exposure is further encouraging us to have more life enriching experiences such as traveling and studying abroad which promote a stronger sense of independence within us.

An increasing level of independence can also be noted through the way people choose to perform every tasks such as shopping, banking and even business transactions. Instead of meeting others face to face, many daily tasks today can be accomplished on our own with the access to the Internet. Thus, many of us can arrange our daily routines according to our personal need and habits.

It is true that there are still existing factors that lead people to remain dependent. Higher demand of life and the resulting increases in the cost of living prevent some especially young adults to possess individual assets such as accommodation and transport. In this case the individual is more prone to seek assistance from families and friends.

However,I believe that the independent thinking that is expanding in modern times through greater global exposure will outweigh the hurdles of higher living costs and will ultimately create a gradual increase in the level of individual independence.

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