2016年4月2日雅思写作真题大作文范文--about race culture

分享4月2日雅思写作大作文考了一道比较抽象的话题：关于种族文化利弊。多元文化的社会，不同种族的人生活在一起，能给一个国家带来更多的利益。让我们就这样的话题展开自己的讨论。这篇范文供大家参考，希望大家多多学习!

Task：

Multicultural societies, where people of different ethnic groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer：

When it comes to the phenomenon that there are more residents who come from different regions and areas in a country, some people may argue that it could bring more benefits to a country, but I cannot agree with this opinion.

Admittedly, residents of different ethnic groups could benefit a country since the society could be more open-minded. If residents in a country all belong to a same ethnic group, when outsiders visit or live there, they may be discriminated by some local people more or less. However, if a country consists of people with various races, it will be more welcomed by outsiders since there may not be a dominant race. Then, countries may benefit from such a phenomenon with more residents, as well as more opportunities of development. Nevertheless, its drawbacks may overshadow the benefits acquired.

Initially, more social conflicts may occur with many ethnic groups’ residents. It is acknowledged that different races have different customs and habits. For example, if a citizen came to a Muslim restaurant and intended to order a menu with pork, obviously, such behavior would lead to severe fighting between the restaurant and the consumer since the restaurant would feel deeply insulted. Thus, to balance and maintain the social order in such a multicultural country is actually a big challenge for the authority.

Furthermore, the cultural identity of a country may be lost as a consequence. When people of different ethnic groups dwell jointly, inevitably, they will be mutually influenced by each other in terms of their daily habits. A potential problem is that local people may refuse to accept their old-fashioned customs and even rituals if they have tried new types of modern life. Then, even though the life quality of local people may be upgraded much, a trade-off is that their history may be abandoned as well.

In sum, considering the potential social chaos and the risk of losing cultural characteristics, a country may be very cautious towards such a tendency brought by the contemporary globalization.

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