雅思写作7分之路第一站——引人入胜的导入段的多重写法

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摘要:好的开头是成功的一半,雅思作文正是如此。考官在阅卷时,会给你1-2分钟的表现时间,如果你失败了,对不起,就像达人秀的那些无情评委一样,你被被out出局,偏偏大多数的人写的雅思作文,败笔都在首段。一起来看看好的导入都长什么样!

(三)、放眼世界 思路:从“时间”或“地点”的跨度着手,比如:过去怎么样?

题目 1:Some people support the development in agriculture, such as farming industry and the scientific creation of new types of fruit and vegetables. Others oppose this development.Discuss both views and state your opinion.

范文:

Recent decades have witnessed a major transformation in agricultural development, where industrial technologies are being employed and new varieties of crops are being created. Yet, opponents of this development have raised a number of difficult questions. From my opinion of views, this is a really complicated matter, and we need further investigations to understand the bigger picture.

雅思写作大作文的开头段写法
雅思写作大作文的开头段写法
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Recent decades have witnessed an increase awareness of

释义:

understand the bigger picture 了解事物的全貌

题目 2:With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close they used to be.

范文 2:

Divorce and family breakdown were virtually unheard of just 100 years ago. Now, however, almost half of all marriages fail. This phenomenon is symptomatic of the growing distance between family members in modern society.

(四)、兼收并蓄 题目 1:谁该为修路付费,个人还是政府?

范文:

Some people hold the opinion that the government should make more investments is expanding and improving road systems, whereas

others who are not so convinced present the counterargument that it is the responsibility of the growing number of private car users to deal with the huge costs. In my opinion, both sides of the argument have their

own reasons, and we need a detailed analysis to get to the root of this controversy.

(五)、 异军突起 题目 1:谈个人科技的发展与贫富差异„ 范 文 1 :

With the huge expansion of high technologies available to individuals, it is sometimes argued that economic and cultural gaps between the rich and poor are being further widened.

题目 2:淡大型超市和商场的急剧扩张..

范文 2:

With the unprecedented explosion of large supermarkets and

shopping malls, a lot of small local shops have quietly disappeared while the remaining ones are struggling for hopeless survival.

释义:

unprecedented explosion 前所未有的爆发

范文 3:

With the continuous and gradual evolution of mass media, many serious crimes are now described in greater detail on newspapers, television and the Internet, raising considerable public concern over personal safety and social stability.

范文 4:

With the mass extinction of endangered and rare species, many

countries have taken harsh measures against illegal hunting, unregulated dumping of industrial waste and rampant destruction of their natural habitats by human developers.

II、中心论点

(一)单边支持/反对类型

提问:Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

范文 1:(反对)

→In my opinion, these subject are not only useful but also fascinating, and it is simply too early for primary schoolchildren to study science and technology.

(二)半支持半反对型

提问:To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

范文 2:

→From my point of view,...

(三)探讨双方型(可以参考前文“兼收并蓄”套路)

提问:Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

范文 3:

→1.To my way of thinking, both sides of the argument have their own reasons, and we need a detailed analysis to get to the root of this controversy. 双方都有理,需要仔细分析才可了解争议起因

→2.To my way of thinking, both these views can be justified to some extent. 一定程度上都有道理

→3.To my way of thinking, both these views contain some elements of the truth, which will be discussed in detail in the following essay.

注:Which 引导定语从句很自然过渡到主体段

(四)分析解决型

提问:In what ways could mobile phones and Internet be useful to older people? How can

old people be encouraged to use this high technology?

→ To my mind,...

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