小站名师之雅思写作救命稻草系列1：9分作文是怎么炼成的

词汇句型

与话题相关的词汇、词组：

School of high learning

高等学府

The spirit of university

大学精神

Admission requirement

准入门槛

Pre-college learning

大学学前教育

Compensation

补助

Adequate and profound knowledge

充足、渊博的知识

高分词汇、词组：

halo

光晕，光环

be prevailing in

在…普遍、盛行

clumsy clodhopper

笨拙的乡巴佬

Paradox

矛盾，悖论

Aid

帮助，援助

arm oneself with…

用…武装自己

be accessible to…

对…可及

the great endeavor

一个伟大的事业

embrace the fruit of …

怀抱…的成果

a humble birth

一个卑贱的出生，糟糕的生活状态

carry…on one’s shoulder

自己担当起…

facilitate the path to…

使…的道路更容易

the golden vault of..

…的大门

高分句型

For the students lived in the countryside, who were suffered for years by being called “The clumsy clodhopper”, the golden vault of university has never been accessible to them.

比喻修辞的优势显现，在第一段展现自己华丽的辞藻和长句组织能力

Nevertheless, in the current context and condition, it’s a paradox that no matter how hard they tried, many of them could still not embrace the fruit of advanced knowledge due to certain aspects like a humble birth and lower quality of pre-college learning.

几个关键的无缝衔接，it’s a paradox that, no matter how, still, due to 逻辑关系先要理顺：矛盾的是…不管如何…仍旧会..那是因为…

Although it’s unfair to lower the qualification for them, some counter-measures should be taken for the sake of a better pre-college learning which could enable them to compete with the urban students in the same platform.

让步语气+宾语从句的搭配，注意which指代的是better pre-college learning

Moreover, for those qualified rural students but have problems to pay the tuition fees, relevant compensations and scholarships should be carried out too by raising of some sorts of “Brilliant humble student’s funds” in order to encourage them financially and spiritually.

大家要培养一段话从头到尾是一句句子的能力