在 GRE 写作中使语言更简洁从而获得高分可以从以下几个方面入手：
一、避免冗余表达
去除重复词汇
检查重复用词：在写作完成后，仔细检查文章中是否存在重复表达相同含义的词汇。例如，“The problem is very complex and very difficult to solve.”（这个问题非常复杂且非常难以解决）中，两个 “very” 就显得冗余，可以简化为 “The problem is very complex and difficult to solve.”
合并同类项：对于意思相近的词汇或短语，进行合并。比如，“The new policy has many advantages and many benefits.”（新政策有许多优点和许多好处）可改为 “The new policy has many advantages.”
精简从句和短语
简化从句：当从句可以用更简单的短语或单词替换时，进行替换。例如，“The book which was written by a famous author is very popular.”（这本由一位著名作家写的书非常受欢迎）可简化为 “The book by a famous author is very popular.”
避免过度修饰：减少不必要的修饰成分，如 “The extremely beautiful and amazingly attractive scenery impressed us deeply.”（那极其美丽和惊人吸引人的景色给我们留下了深刻的印象）可改为 “The beautiful scenery impressed us deeply.”
二、优化句子结构
避免复杂的嵌套结构
拆分复杂句：如果一个句子中包含多个从句的嵌套，容易使句子冗长且难以理解，可将其拆分成简单句。例如，“The fact that although he had tried his best, which was known to everyone, he still failed the exam made him very frustrated.”（尽管他已经尽了最大努力这一事实，大家都知道，他还是考试不及格，这使他非常沮丧）可拆分为 “He had tried his best. This fact was known to everyone. He still failed the exam. This made him very frustrated.”
减少并列结构：避免使用过多的并列成分使句子过长。如，“I like reading books, watching movies, playing sports, and listening to music.”（我喜欢读书、看电影、做运动和听音乐）可根据需要进行精简，如 “I like reading books, watching movies and listening to music.”
使用主动语态
主动代替被动：主动语态通常比被动语态更简洁直接。例如，“The work was finished by him yesterday.”（工作被他昨天完成了）可改为 “He finished the work yesterday.”
强调动作执行者：在需要突出动作执行者时，主动语态更能达到简洁明了的效果。
三、直接表达核心观点
开门见山阐述论点
减少铺垫：在文章开头，避免过多的铺垫和引入，直接提出核心论点。比如，不要写 “Throughout history, there have been many discussions and many debates about this issue. Now I want to say that...”（纵观历史，关于这个问题有过许多讨论和许多辩论。现在我想说……），而直接写 “I believe that...”（我认为……）
紧扣主题：在论述过程中，不要偏离主题进行无关的阐述，始终围绕核心观点展开。
剔除无关信息
删除离题内容：检查文章中是否存在与论点无关的内容，即使这些内容写得很精彩，也应删除。例如，在论述 “科技对教育的影响” 时，不要加入过多关于科技在其他领域（如医疗、交通等）的发展情况的描述。
